I was never able to express such words when I was young,
what your face was like after I sung a song,
You told me to watch my tongue,
but you did not have to do all this for my small lung.
Your melodious routine calmed me,
to the point where I was able to be free,
By my side, a welcoming warmth,
the cold never stormed.
When I was hurt,
you came forth to give me yogurt,
I must say, your cooking is heavenly,
it helped me become full of energy.
You let me go places,
but what about you, I have not seen you go for ages,
you care for others too much,
it makes me wonder, what you have yet to clutch.
But I am a selfish fool,
I cast you away as if you are a tool,
I’m sorry, will you forgive this soul,
I need you to wipe from me, my charcoal.
This has yet to end,
when you grow old, I will gladly tend,
know this, for this is forever true,
Mom, I love you.
Theresa, your ode was wonderful! I didn’t really know what your ode was about until it reached the end and you said you were writing about your mother. I think it’s great you love your mom so much and she supports and guides throughout all of the struggles of life. Well done!
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This is a very meaningful ode, I like the ways that you described what you were trying to come across. This is a very good one!
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This is actually the cutest thing ever! I too wrote a poem for my parents, so I could really appreciate your work. I especially loved the line about yogurt. I was smiling the whole way through. Wonderful job!
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I actually teared up a bit while reading this poem, Theresa. Powerful, stark imagery!
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